Inside and out
Through and through
The tao permeates through old and new
A sense of being
But still letting live
Relent desires and you’ll begin
Begin the journey
To comprehend
The world consists of a blend
Black and White
Yin and Yang
Nothing is all the same
We are the product of balance
Our skin the canvas of the two
The balance of yin and yang that makes us me and you
I like the word choice that you used because it makes your poem have a vivid message.
ReplyDeleteI like the theme of twos that you had. It encompasses the Yin and Yang and you used that to come up with real world examples of it to emphasize too. I like the way everything comes together and sounds in my head too.
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