I really like your poem! The format makes it especially memorable and the brevity puts a lot of emphasis on your words. You managed to say a lot while still saying very little. I can see how it relates to the Tao with the whole of idea of everything is not what it seems, although that may just be my interpretation of your poem.
I really liked your one word sentences and the way your poem was formatted. I feel like it added a lot of dramatic affect to the poem and really strengthened the main idea.
I like how your poem has such a unique appearance. The spacing and short phrases make it really different. I also like how you found a way to use formatting to emphasize the overall idea of your poem.
I like how dramatic this poem sounded. As I was reading it, I could picture everything happening and you almost painted a picture with it. It also sounded very raw and down to earth.
I really like your poem! The format makes it especially memorable and the brevity puts a lot of emphasis on your words. You managed to say a lot while still saying very little. I can see how it relates to the Tao with the whole of idea of everything is not what it seems, although that may just be my interpretation of your poem.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your one word sentences and the way your poem was formatted. I feel like it added a lot of dramatic affect to the poem and really strengthened the main idea.
ReplyDeleteI like how your poem has such a unique appearance. The spacing and short phrases make it really different. I also like how you found a way to use formatting to emphasize the overall idea of your poem.
ReplyDeleteI like how dramatic this poem sounded. As I was reading it, I could picture everything happening and you almost painted a picture with it. It also sounded very raw and down to earth.
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