Everything
Movement
It’s in the wind,
The waves,
The people
Energetic, loud
Stillness
It’s in the lakes
The trees
The earth
Calm, quiet
And around it all,
There’s the universe
Light and dark
Stars and space and planets and
Everything
I love how you were able to convey the movement and stillness in such few words. The description of the universe at the end gives a wonderful sense of balance in your poem.
ReplyDeleteI really like how your poem was concise, yet it was able to evoke a lot of meaning and imagery. You were able to choose very powerful descriptions that brought the poem to life.
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