Mary Gutierrez
The balance
Strong yet vulnerable
Bright yet dark
Brave yet wise
Balance is the key
To not worry
Go with the flow
Let the wind take you
Be alive with no fear
Don’t be afraid
Don’t plan ahead
The Tao will take care of you
Show you the way
But don’t look for it
Let go of your problems
Float away
Be careful
Everything will be okay
I like the repetition you use in your poem, it makes it flow nicely!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the repetition in your poem, it is very powerful and really emphasizes the meaning of your poem. I also like how the final line is separate from the first stanza. It is very simple, yet it sums up the poem very well. I like how you used the idea of wind carrying you, and how you continued the idea in other lines of the poem.
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